Here’s what so cool about this edition of Short Story Friday: we’re linking to a revised version of a story (as he notes below — the first short story) that was first published at Popcorn Popping. And we can do that because we let people provide feedback to what we posted and Shawn decided to use it and revise the story.
Author: S.P. Bailey
Publication Info: revised version of a story posted at Popcorn Popping, April 2006
Submitted by: S.P. Bailey
Why?: Shawn writes: “1. More missionary/post-mission stuff. A great subject in my opinion.
2. This was the first ever story posted on Popcorn Popping. Heady stuff. The linked version is substantially edited–based in part on the critiques received at PP. Link to the original version.
3. I wrote it.”